Dream Deep

(Nah, don't get excited, people. This is just a re-post from TSR so I have it here to work with... Part IV'll be forth-coming as soon as I get some ...

*backs away and runs to hills after Gazza...* Oh the scary aspects of your bordeom, lol...

o.O

Oh that was simply great, Jiggy. I loved it... and lol, I think it says a lot about human reaction in general. I really loved it. Great job. I think ...

Lol, thanks you guys, Myth and Kay! Ick, the typos - I am bad for that, I should have revised this... perhaps I was a little overconfident in my typing ...

Hey, thanks Imp. The crit is very much appreciated, and I do apologize for all the typos... lol, I didn't revise very well before posting this. Sorry. ^_~ (oh yes, ...

Wow, thanks Wiggy! You make good points about some of the sentence structure... and as I said, heh, I should have revised a litle more before posting, but I was ...

*hugs*

Lol, better. Very neat. ^_^

Aww, thanks MH! It really isn't revised at all, but considering I wrote this in two hours last night at midnight as a free-write, I thought it was decent enough ...

Lol, but I commented on this in TSR... .. but even so, something just hit me. You should try to work in there something about the Oracle's extraordinary affinity for ...

Oy... nicely done, but use spaces! This is very difficult to read as it is...

Lol, amusing to read... ^_~

Lol, sounds like me just before the SATs... ^_^

That's beautiful, bob! Heh, I love it. ^_^